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Friday, May 8, 2020

Super Mega Crocodile




For Writing in Miss smiths group we had to do a report on an animal as you can see I chose the crocodile first we had to brainstorm what we wanted to do then we had to write what things we had to write about. What animal would you choose?

3 comments:

  1. Hi Zac, I learned so much about crocodiles, I would choose a jaguar.
    Why did you choose crocodiles?
    Next time you could add a few more pictures into the slide.

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  2. Kia ora Zac
    Wow I did not know that there are 12 different types of crocodiles. I would be absolutely terrified if I came across a crocodile. Would you? You included lots of fascinating facts. Perhaps next time you use different backgrounds and photos. Great job!

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  3. Hi Zac,
    There is lots of interesting information. The Nile Crocodile sounds very scary. Maybe next time you could add some more pictures so you can capture the readers attention.

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