This term in inquiry we have been learning about Sustainable Civilisations. This slide is showing the use of swist, swist is from a book called weslandia. Weslandia is about a child called Weasley he is the only one in his class that hasn't got half of his hair shaved off. So he gets bullied, once the school finished for the year he decided that he wanted to make his own civilization he fliped up the dirt in the backyard and waited for the wind to blow seeds in the soil 5 days later some weeds came along and his neighbor said "there are some weeds in your garden" Weasley said, "no they are my plants". Ok, that's about halfway into the story can you tell me any changes that I could do to make my reading more clear or if it just makes no sense.
